by REGade
another fine submission, keep up the great work,i know all of your many fans are pleased, galen
Hi there, this was such a nice story. I know how Cliff feels about going home and you had the emotions spot on.
Thank you
Of course, there could have been more details, but as played it makes people think happy thoughts and feel good. Thanks..
Another great story from your desk for our enjoyment. Keep up the good work and look foreward to more of your stories.
Thanks.
Nobody wants to go home. Even a moron declares bankruptcy and finds a new job. Sell the car before it gets repossessed. Finance guys are smarter than this dummy. Find a new job in a smaller market, learn your lesson and move on. Going home and cutting grass is hardly an option. And no self respecting woman, upon finding out what he had done and was doing, touches him with a ten foot pole. Even for a fictional story this was simply ludicrous.
1 star