by Jay_Lloyd
It seemed so real, like the people actually exist. Very good story.
TELL US WHAT HAPPENS, WELL AFTER SHE SLAPS HIM SILLY, THEN WHAT HAPPENS AS THEY TRY TO FIGUIRE THINGS OUT
One of the best stories i read on this site in a long time...more please!
VERY romantic - the characters were both likeable and, although the story didn't contain a whole lot, the emotions and the relationship between the lovers were great - one of the best stories I have read on this site. - No cheap sluts, no whores, no cheating.
I would really like a sequel to this sory.
Thank you.
Dude!!!! I thought he was going to die!!!! Awesome story!!! I loved it and a sequel would definitely be welcomed...
What a great story! There was tender romance, near tragedy, and lots of fun sex. What more does a girl want?