by a_bent_ampersand
guess Harlan is stuck in that chair. This is some cast of characters. I actually enjoyed the writing although it is different. Ronnie seems to have the whole trailer park pregnant. Thanks for sharing.
Too much.Soo unrealistic story plot.Almost a sci fi...
Don´t do drugs, dude.It affects your brain.
Please, never stop writing. You are a master of the wicked and a virtuoso of the erotic. Please dont ever stop.
FEEL THE THINGS HE WAS DOING TO WOMEN.
SOMEONE RESCUE HARLAN..THE REST OF THEM DESERVE WHAT THEY GET
Where the hell did you learn the English language? Worst written story I've ever read, please please please don't submit any more!!!!
Only real brain sick people can write such an idiotic crap!!!
I don't understand how retarded you have to be to get turned on by this story.
The writer must be a freaking retards to write something so stupid, nonsense and disgusting like this trash story.
It seems the writer has some serious mental illness mixed with some cuckold issues and some gay issues that were transported to this ugly and garbage story.
This story made me waste 3 minutes of my time.
1* for this lame.
Lust4Sure
Well, I had to read this story all the way through with the hope that someone was going to put this jerk out of his misery. And at the very last part, I sensed that Joy was going to use the gun Jana had brought over and take all the competition out, instead of wiping out her heartthrob, Ronnie by mistake.
The only part I love about this story is he loves fucking even mothers and daughters (Incest).
If I didn't know any better, your writing skill is on par with mine, the shits.
Lust4Sure
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