All Comments on 'Stay, Don't Leave Me'

Nice build up to the climax. Another please.

Good character development and build up. Very erotic. I look forward to more stories; you have a new fan.

Very Nice story it seems so realistic how a brother and Sister can share a special bond like that and end up being together. Hopefully, this is tha begining of more chapters to come and I'll add you aswell as a favorite author...:P

i knew there was a reason you're on my fav list. great story, keep em cumin, lol see what i just did, a pun!!

Great story! Loved reading it and it was very easy to get into it.

Well, what do you know? A story without the 'Hi, let's fuck!' mentality. Nice one.

Oh god oh god, this is exactly the story I have been fantasizing about and trying to write for weeks, or months. Oh she's so lovely.

This type of relationship can have many benefits. Reduced stress, improved confidence and a lot of fun. Many would like to try but are afraid to take first big step

Very sweet and loving, but still erotic and explicit.

Another chapter would be very good, telling how their love for each other developed along with their sexual affair.

Thanks for the read.

very well done :-) ... most incest stories are mindless stroke stories with no real plot or emotions being shown ... this story was a very pleasant surprise :-)

having been through similar with my own sister ... it IS confusing emotionally ... being taught one set of standards, and wanting what you are told you are not supposed to want

Once again, you have written a great story. Keep up the good work.

Loved it! It makes you wonder how many siblings actually cross the line like this.

I've been away from the site for awhile. Coming back to one of your stories was good choice. They are always believable. No exaggerated body part sizes or graphic sex description. Just a nice story. Enjoyed it.

The build up to them having actual intercourse was terrific. You are one of the better authors on this site. Cheers mate.

one of the best I have read on the site

The best I've read so far, on the topic. Loved it. The detail before the storie's climax was amazing. Well done

that was great edven if it took a little while

The way captured some moments was truly great

I enjoyed the flow of your story. Over all well written.

Nice story, one would suspect that her partying and drinking and some of her comments that she had already concluded that for better or worse the only guy that made her happy was her brother, one of the few stories I would mind seeing where it leads with another chapter at least.

I was looking for a hot brother/sister incest story with lots of dirty talk and thought this might be such a story. It turned out to be sweet and kind of sappy and I loved that.

5/5, made me smile

story built quietly, but good sex scene, nice people-well-written thanks

Nice build up so as to be believable. Somewhere between the more common jump right in or the opposite extreme of the incesantly whinig/resisting sibling.

once again we get left hanging. i really hate when writers start a story get you hooked then FAIL to finish it makes you wish we had a delete button. for not finishing the story you get a negative vote and if i could i would ban you from the site and delete all your stories so other readers wouldn't have to put up with your unfinished stories.

I rarely say this but I hope that you keep writing. That was one of the best that I have read. Good job. Keep it up.

To the Too Bad Anonymous who thinks he was left hanging (at least it seemed like a he): there is something called the IMAGINATION. If one uses it a bit, one can do all sorts of things with a story like this, and Xarth is a master of the genre. That said, if Xarth wants to add another chapter, I'm sure it would be as worthwhile as this one. He is certainly my favorite author on this site, and I wish he wrote in the general market. I certainly hope to read more of his work here.

It seems like she wants to seduce him after she sobers up. Her comments definitely seem to be testing the waters throughout the story. It has good characters and development, but does seem to lose something at the end.

whats with all the bad reveiws? its stories like these i was i can reinact with my actual girlfriend out partying and i stay sober. this is a 5 star if U ASK me.

Very realistic portrayal of sibling explorations.

Siblings exploring and there could be all kinds of reasons for the sister's trepidation that lead her to stay "home" for her doing this is instead of trying it with some stranger ending up dead somewhere. Siblings close in age that can connect are fortunate in communications, not necessarily in this fashion but in any not physical. I'd rather kick the shit out of my sister that is 3 years older growing up, she was blonde and I was forced by my Dad to be the big brother as she was a dense idiot once we were both in high school and beyond. Luckily I was a large farm kid 6'6 230 and could keep the poachers off her but I'd never ever want to do anything close to this story with her period. This kid was lucky!!

Making love with your sister with her agreement is the best thing that can happen to a brother in his life.Believe me,its unique!!

Absolutely great story, great plot and the pace was just right, really enjoyed this story

Now this was a great story...unlike your silly satire series. Good job!

Nothing but praise from me. Absolutely love every one of your stories, no matter how long they are. I especially love the way you can tell a good stories in no less than two pages

I have read hundreds of stories over the years and I can honestly attest that this was the best ever! It was well written, soft comforting words that actually made you feel their emotions. Thanks for a super job.

Just letting you know that I have had a hard cock that I just had to take care of it felt great

really really liked it. only thing i could think that would have made it better would be a slightly different ending.

as they cuddled in bed he slowly rolls away. she tenses up and says "stay, don't leave me." after a few seconds he rolls back over and puts his arm back around her pulling her close. he kisses her shoulder and her neck then whispers in her ear "just turning off the alarm, I'm here to stay, I'm never going to leave you."

Hot and excellent build up. Gawd I wish I had a sister !

This story really worked for me; Thank you. I rarely comment on stories, but I couldn't let this go unapplauded.

Xarth, you always know what you are doing and saying. This Xarth dry humor you are known for.

Great story and thank you extra for omitting all that tiresome “oh but we’re brother and sister.”, as if after Nearly 2 decades they haven’t figured out the relationship yet. Then that oh but its illegal,crap. Yes, so is driving 66 on the interstate around a city. And you are far more likely to run into the police doing the latter than the former. Come to think of it, in all my 69 years on this planet, not once have I read about siblings being arrested while screwing in their own bed! You?

Thank you for the thought provoking story!

Old Uncle Al