by drlust
Although it could've been explored more deeply, this story has every essential component and the steady flow was incredibly easy to read and impossible to discontinue. The narrative character is a rare, rare bird in the world these days, a good guy who knows what he's doing! Really nicely done!
No previous comments- that's a shame...Your story was well written and people should have said so ! Thanks for baring a bit of yourself . Mike .
Outstanding. The character of Mark was what a lot of women dream about, caring, understanding, honest and we can't forget the sexuality of him... incredible. Now, I've gotta go read some of your other stuff
Your writing is sensitive, well paced, understanding of emotion, and erotic. To combine all this into a story that made me want to continue reading is a major accomplishment.
I will now seek out other stories by you. Keep writing....you have a talent not to be wasted.