by softspokenstephen
Enjoyable read. Fast, fun, and yet just enough to make it well rounded. Keep the new chapters cumming.
Good story idea but it ends there. She constantly teased him too far but wouldn't do anything to relieve him, until the last page and then a quick bj and she's gone. I'll give it two stars. Should have had a lot of sex between the two from day one.
ı know you are a new writer and believe me ı read lots of stories here and this story is one of the best ones :) please continue to writing and hurry :) ı lıke the tease keep it up :) thanks for the story
I feel a little like Stevie. Dazed and Confused. Our author kind of leavs "stuff hanging". Needs resolution, like the young man.
Love the story but you can't leave it on a cliff hanger like this I hope you do more chapters
why didn't you write next chapter, man? story is very hot and needs continuation.