All Comments on 'Staying with Mrs. Wentworth, Day 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Excellent Story Line

Enjoyable read. Fast, fun, and yet just enough to make it well rounded. Keep the new chapters cumming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Poor little Stephen

Good story idea but it ends there. She constantly teased him too far but wouldn't do anything to relieve him, until the last page and then a quick bj and she's gone. I'll give it two stars. Should have had a lot of sex between the two from day one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
please continue :)

ı know you are a new writer and believe me ı read lots of stories here and this story is one of the best ones :) please continue to writing and hurry :) ı lıke the tease keep it up :) thanks for the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

I feel a little like Stevie. Dazed and Confused. Our author kind of leavs "stuff hanging". Needs resolution, like the young man.

Sub_HubbieSub_Hubbieabout 10 years ago
Hot

Loved it! Well done. Now excuse me while I finish myself off...

TSreaderTSreaderover 8 years ago
Lots of fun

And very erotic too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Love the story but you can't leave it on a cliff hanger like this I hope you do more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
i like this

real tease of a story, nicely told, looking forward to day 04

daganetdaganetover 5 years ago

why didn't you write next chapter, man? story is very hot and needs continuation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Great story. Too bad you didn’t have more

Cub124Cub124over 1 year ago

Please continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

next chapter

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