All Comments on 'Steam Ch. 00-01'

This certainly came as something of a surprise! Well-written and impossible 'to put down', even if it's totally weird! Welcome to Literotica, axmanjack - I look forward to seeing just where this is going to go, and I am more than happy to give you five stars for a great start. Keep it up - thank you.

This is excellent writing , please continue. Your character development and editing are top shelf.

Thanks for the positive feedback folks!

I'm finishing up chapter two right now, and I am also editing a novel I've already finished in anticipation of dropping it on this site.

Much Love,

-AMJ

Love the story so far. Steampunk and magic! Like Girl:Genius, with sex :D

Good day, literary agent, I must say I am pleased beyond compare to see steampunk being brought to this site, it is seriously needed. My main hope is that writing this novel will be full steam ahead, and not break down before the journey is finished like so many steam powered literary agents have done in the past leaving one stranded in a land unfinished.

In other words love it, well written can't wait for more and I hope to god you finish the story LOL X

No, I plan on finishing this, though i usually run around two to four weeks per chapter, depending on the length of the chapter itself.

Chapter two is currently pending approval, so expect that soon!

Thanks for reading!

-AMJ

The world-in-creation looks very promising and I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the tale. Your writing skills are evident! Thanks for writing!