All Comments on 'Steampunk Harlots Ch. 21'

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TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 7 years ago
Thanks

A guilty pleasure. 5*

chitowntrollchitowntrollabout 7 years ago

Your stories are the best

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
ok, comment incoming

This story (and I mean the entire thing, not just this chapter) is brash, trashy and crude, yet also funny, hot and clever.

There's actually some interesting worldbuilding stuff in the background, I get the feeling you have a map with cities and frontlines marked on it. Since our heroes have become somewhat involved in a cause, we might even get to see a bit of the bigger picture at some point.

Overall, keep writing them, I'll keep reading them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
love it

I bookmarked this back on Chapter 6 and I'm so glad every time a new chapter is posted. Please keep this story going! It's hot but also really great storytelling that keeps everything interesting. -bain

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Competition

Have them land in the capitol and having to up their sexual game as they find out a secret brothel is already there and not wanting to share clientele.

nthusiasticnthusiasticabout 4 years ago

Last Line’s a Hoot!

That’s so funny, given Hannah and Leira’s current games!

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