All Comments on 'Steampunk Romp'

Forgive me I have some ideas for your next encounter, er customer. You probably know most inventors end up penniless. So I propose he open a boudoir for customers to learn all their purchase will do. The idea I have in mind is from literotica, and a couple open a symbian store, for those who can't afford to buy their own machine.

Your story could easly be much longer for my taste. I sin cerly hope you continue this story, I'd like to help butt I've fired my guns with this comment, and like the sign at my mechanic's states if you help it will cost you more, and if you started the job a lot more.

Loooking forward to more steam punk. Can you imagine how bulky this is, she certainly can't keep it in the night stand, or the top shelf of the closet. So a boudoir, and eventually a woman's club. You go girls....

Very descriptive and extremely careful use of words!! I truely enjoyed it. I will read more soon!!