All Comments on 'Steamy Encounter'

I think you should throw your air conditioner away if the heat makes them both this horny. Hot Hot Hot!! Keep up the good writing... we'll certainly all keep on reading

Well...I want you to know that I thought your story was HOT HOT HOT ! You kept me on the edge of my seat...which is a good thang...and I want you to know...I had a BEAR in my ear and he knew what the finish of this story was about. *coughs*...I do think he enjoyed my gasps and coo's as the story went into " uncharted waters" for me shall we say.

I have to admit...* looks around for Drench the Anal Guru*... that your presentation of ALL things in this story were quiet impressive and makes one wonder...do I ...do I not...do I ...do I not...

Great work Carol...keep writing. (psst...what kinda lube was that btw?)

XOXOX's...Twinkie

Taking from your name you live in Florida. I live in Florida as well so I can fully agree with you about the heat mentioned in the story....damn near untolerable at times! I thought you did very well for your first story. If this first story is a precursor of the things to come from you...then I see a hot steamy road here in Lit for you. Keep up the great work...I look forward to your next one.

Well, X, I'll be viewing you in a much different light from now on...*smile* Absolutely GREAT story and hope there's more...

Xplorer, I don't know what else you could put in a story. I set here speechless reading it. Best of luck on any thing else you write.

Loved knowing you were are only end of char while I was reading, start and END were the best

Loved knowing you were are only end of a chat while I was reading, start and END were the best

I knew you could do it~~!! This is a greatttt story,an so dang hot..! You go on an write another we are all waiting in suspense.. Loved it all. Very err descriptive, great flow, and easy to picture it alll.. * Fans self*~~ We want more~~!!!

Very well written. Great with descriptions. I wonder what else is in you to tell about.

Scott

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at last....knew you could do it.

waitin for next chapter now....anychance of a bit part when i'm not at work!!!!

Truly wonderfully erotic