All Comments on 'Steel Heaven'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Looking forward to more

Nice build up would be very interested to read some more to see where it goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Write

I love finding peeps that can actually write! Bravo!

suppleWritersuppleWriterover 9 years ago
Loved the ending!

Loved the ending!

jmkuehnjmkuehnover 9 years ago
very nice opening

This story was awesome. I hope there will be a second chapter. This should continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Encore!!

5 stars! Thanks for a great story!!

Duke567Duke567over 9 years ago

I love the FFm chastity story. This story is similar to a fantasy I have been having, and inspired me to write it down and submit it. Thanks

airwolf64airwolf64about 6 years ago
1 star crap

Rape is rape.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

No agreement, no safe words, no love, no respect and anal rape.

chefjess2039chefjess2039about 1 year ago

Good writing but the story is crap and why is every story writing with the girlfriend,mother or wife as an vil person out to destroy men. There's lots of real couples that do chastity out of love not hate and deceit I give this story a 1 Star only because I can't give it negative dtars

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well written and arousing.

And to those who claim it was rape: if a story doesn't mention safewords, it doesn't mean it endorses real scenes without one.

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I'm a fairly quiet and reserved guy. I enjoy writing, and my dream job would be writing stories for video games. I enjoy football (both pro and college,) as well as pro wrestling, and, obviously, playing video games. I love dogs, but I'm not really a cat person. I have a m...