All Comments on 'Step By Step Ch. 01'

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LyndaCurtisLyndaCurtisabout 13 years ago
more please...

I loved it.. please continue...

lickemgoodlickemgoodabout 13 years ago
Good.

Well written and opened many doors. Please write more and lead the way.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loved this!

Well written. Gor me wishing for the sequel....

MissLisaJonesMissLisaJonesabout 13 years agoAuthor
This is chapter 1

Of nine. It's a slow starter but it builds.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice

A great beginning. I look forward to new chapters.

bluewillybluebluewillyblueabout 13 years ago
Great job!

Very nice start, look forward to more.

elegant_submissiveelegant_submissiveabout 13 years ago

Great beginning, can´t wait for the next chapters.

LesbianKarenLesbianKarenabout 13 years ago
Very nice

Very nice story. Has my interest peaked for the next chapter.

DryhillDryhillabout 13 years ago
GREAT OPENING CHAPTER

A really good opener to a much longer story. Our beloved author does not waste time in getting the story underway, yet does not skimp on characterization or scene setting.

elle_9549elle_9549over 12 years ago
Great start

You have me hooked and I can't wait to read more. ~ L

liz33ndliz33ndover 8 years ago
Great start

NOw I think I need to grab a bottle of wine and a hot bath! Then later I am sure a cold shower, ha ha

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