All Comments on 'Step By Step Ch. 05'

but your story overtook your writing. Too many technical errors. I know you feel you must post a new story every three days, but don't spoil a major series with minor technical errors. I know the feeling when the story is writing itself and it's coming too fast to self-edit. But that's the time, when you've gotten it all down, to go back and rewrite, in cold blood, and rewrite again.

Quibbles follow via "Send Feedback". Please accept my repeated assurances that I do not do this to play the pedant, or show off. I only quibble good stories by good writers. I don't waste time on the unredeemable.

Thank you Miss Lisa for such an enjoyable story. I read the whole story several times on another site and am enjoying reading it again.

This is making me horny. But I guess that's the point! ~ L

The suspense and coerion is fascinating.✴

another part ruined by spanking, and it is seeming that Sam is just turning out to be a bully to Helen, and Helen is letting her do it