All Comments on 'Step-Lovers Ch. 02'

For me, the only thing I can criticise, though it is a minor thing, is your use of "she" it just got a little confusing at times about which girl you were referring (took me about 10 secs to figure it out). Also, I felt that it needed more content (the guy mentioned he had sex with becky out of nowhere). Other than that it's an alright story, though I did love the ending (I think that's what every man's dream is if you're not gay that is). Keep up the good work and hope to read more work from you.

(I aplogise if i got anything wrong or disrespected you in any way)

never add anyone to an incest relationship it has to remain just the two it started with no one else.

What a great step-sibling love story, was a little short in length but when Becky joining them in a polyamorous relationship that was great. Then Lisa and Becky having his kids with happily ever after was a great ending. Well Done 5 stars

Good story until it turned into a 3some 2⭐️ here