All Comments on 'Step Mommy Slut'

very good story so far hope to read more.

Awesome. I would love it to continue.

Continue

Let's see how the D/s relationship grows between stepmother and stepson, and please don't forget the cuckolding of dear old limp-dick dad...

loved it can't wait for more

Good start

Can we have some public humiliation

Looking forward to seeing where your imagination takes you.

Eh...was too easy considering she didn't like him to begin with and is his step-mom and I know moms that are subs and it would take more effort than this. **

I liked it. Keep going.

Hard to believe anyone gets off on this sort of garbage. I looked at the writers other stuff and it seems some people do. No fun here.

I only read half of this garbage and couldn't stand any more of it, 0 stars cause I can't rate it any lower. total waste of time.

Sorry but this reads (what little I could read) like some horny teens idea of what he wants. ONE hint stepmom is submissive and he automatically knows exactly what to do? No sign the kid is a Dom or knows ANYTHING about it yet he 'cracks her shell' within minutes?

IF he had a sub at college and was used to her/missing her....that might have made a BIT more sense.

Generally speaking.... not worth my time. Sorry

She goes from hating to as soon as he gives her one order she starts to obey his every command straight away if she didn't like him she would put up a fight to the commands that he was giving her think more about what you are writing and read it through yourself before you post it

If that's your reaction to someone actually daring to post their opinion on your story, you might want to think about posting stories. What you got was comparatively light, and you are basically throwing a hissy fit because someone actually posted negative comments on what I can only presume you think is some kind of magnum opus.

But if You think most of the Responders on here are going to be Nice. Try checking out some of the Established writers like Just_Plain_Bob , HardDaysKnight , Scouries<. etc. They get so much neg. feedback that if they listened to their Critics they would never write on here again.

Good read I hope you continue this story. Since the son heard his dad he decided to try his luck and it ended up being something worth while.

David

More chapters

Okay, I'm not really into this dom/sub thing but despite the way the guy treated Stephanie, it was well written and had good continuity. About David's language toward her, I thought it was not only over the top, but really juvenile and the one guy that posted the business about her flipping from hate to full on sex didn't work too well. If necessary in a case like this either make the story longer to make a believable transition or go into a second chapter.

Otherwise, nice story.

I forgot my password so I couldn't send this with my name on it, but I'm Ted (pooky12349) I personally think its a bit on the chickenshit side to send anonymous messages, but thats just me.

I came all over my pillow reading this story, i love degradation and humiliation, please master please! Will you write more?

WHEN WILL MORE CHAPTERS COMR

I definitely love this one. And since it seems like Dad is submissive maybe when dad comes back, Dad continues to be submissive and when the son comes home from college the son controls the household

Would like to read more of what's in store for step mom before dad gets home

First of all excellent story overall however I would like to point out that in this particular instance the submissive wouldnt have given in this easily as there was an obvious hate on for the stepson she would have rebelled regardless of how submissive her tendencies may be as to the people complaining about the way he talked to her u have to remember that in some of the more hardcore s&m lifestyles this is actually how they are treated the issue here is that the son had no prior knowledge to his stepmom submissive side outside of what he heard the dad doing in the bedroom and had no real idea as to wether she is this way all the time or if it was just a kink in the bedroom also please note that a sub/master situation requires an extreme amount of trust on both side of the equation something that obviously was not here however as far as wank material goes the story is pretty good

I am the exact same woman as Stephanie, I loved this story it was like you were looking into my soul❤️

Your writing is tight and effective. You’re very good!

Very good!