All Comments on 'Step-Sister Slut'

Though this story is advertised as the rambling tale of Lauren's sexual exloits, I was left craving more details. This passage is a prime example:

"Kitty and Lauren had a threesome with Kitty's boyfriend that night. The next night, they did it with Lauren's boyfriend. The next day, each of the boys was demanding to know who was better in the bed. Lauren said that Kitty was better than both of them. Kitty said that Lauren was better than both of them. The boys found themselves dumped within a couple minutes."

The story has potential... Why not give us ALL the play-by-plays?

I had mental images of what was going on throughout the entire story.............made me want to be involved.................. great job.

jb