by m_storyman_x
Please make another chapter. I'd love to see these three continue. Also adding the mom was a good idea. Let's hope she gets involved as well.
I hope you are going to keep going. So much more fun to be had yet
It's funny how when he realized Tammy was doing it with Vicky, he concluded she "swings both ways". At that point, there's no indication she's into guys at all. But of course she is, cause wish fulfillment.
The second half felt a bit loose and even less believable and mom was a strange tangent. But I liked the first session, especially before Vicky returned. And the twist in the end was nice. A strong ending always lifts a story up.
Very hot way from step-brother and step-sister to break the ice even more. Vickie really helped Tammy and Andy get connected! He having a big long cock and his step-sister and best girlfriend having more than a friend-friend relationship. Yes, we need to see Andy and Tammy bang each other silly when Mom and Dad are gone plus Andy banging Vickie too. Of course, his new step-Mom having seen his huge young cock and rubbing her pussy might want to do him too?? In any case, the potential here is huge. Please more, thank you!
mmmmm - nice ... ready for more ... hope to read about fucking with mom ...
Please continue the story with step mom, step sister and him together. And maybe get both pregnant.
Why write a story you do not intend to finish? Total waste of time.
It wasn't a waste of time, it was a great story with a good stopping point that left plenty of options for further chapters in different directions if he chooses! Don't get me wrong, I would LOVE to see several more chapters on this one, heh, but it is just a story, not a fucking novel. :)
...don't know what those two were stressing about though, it was obvious that she didn't Mind them fucking, she just told them to keep it down, not to stop, hehehe, that and she wants in, otherwise her robe would have been closed, hehe!
...and I know guys are typically dense, but he should have at least suspected that the whole tied to the bed thing was set up for his mutual benefit, rofl!! ...and don't know why he even hesitated at getting naked for the girls, silly boy! ;)
Man it was a fun short story! Gotta love her ambitious bff!
Not a waste of time if it has a chapter 2 later but not in the direction I have an interest in following.
Good so far! I would like you to continue,” lots of ways to go” , with three hot women and maybe even dad gets in the action.
The whole "rape" blackmail part kinda threw me out of the fantasy for a bit. Sure, the parents could actually believe it, kick him out, disown him, whatever; but, it would have to be proved that it even happened for the "jailbird" comment to hold much of a threat. If they had video of it, all that would do is show a threesome. Or even paint Vicky as the "rapist."
Sadly, there are many falsely convicted in the system of course, (and vice versa.)
Anyways, my only complaint is that there are way too many stories on here where someone has "leverage" over someone else, but it's so flimsy that it's laughable. It's just a pet peeve of mine, lol.
So, that's me on my soapbox, enjoyed the story. ;)
Was a well written story and really needed to have a sequel, however I doubt it will happen seeing how long ago it was posted. Story was well done. 5 stars
No No No!!! You can’t leave.it like that, you have to finish it! very good!
Loved it! Now for the followup with the step mom. Five stars and a favorite point!
as I read this, I thought: I've read this before. And sure enough...comments reach back about 4 years, even though it came up on my newsfeed as published just 3 days ago. resubmitted? revised? either way...still a hot story....you're among one of my favourite authors, storyman!
Definitely need a sequel!!! Maybe Vickie can get to lick mom / step moms pussy for warmup and then stepson can join in …. 😈
Great story(ies); just a question - in several, you have the female orally finish off the male. Why never the male cleaning up the female?
"I didn't rape you!" I protested quickly.
"Uh. Lover boy. What do you call sticking your dick into someone without their permission?"
"You're absolutely right. Let's call the police... I'm sure Vickie and I can use the same lawyer when we're *both* arrested. After all, she was instrumental in your being 'raped'."
I read it over 4 years ago and got just as hard this time.
Great plot! Tricked her brother into a great fuck.
Exciting and erotic.
One of your best adventures.
Please continue the series.
At the word rape, I bailed. Unfortunately my mind can never see any good regardless of the circumstances when the word rape is mentioned or hinted at. I'm and old guy that just can't adjust to rape equating to any kind of fun.
I had been enjoying the story til then however.
When rape came up I said to myself this story has become bullshit. Always with the threats bullshit that no one can resist giving in to. Anbivalence had the answer.
Rape card being played,, it automatically became a 1⭐️ story and bailed on it ,,, sad that the bitch of a sister would do that
To turn this story into first a rape allegation and then into blackmail was just purely wrong.Instead Tammy and Vickie should have reversed the roles and tied Andy to the bed and fucked him while tied up,also have the Girls heavily make out on top of him and sucking face and tits to get him hard,and give him a dual blowjob and kissing at the top of his cock. And Tammy and Vickie fighting over who got to fuck him first.
Or another scenario could've been the true classic of skimpy clothes and seduction to entice Stepbrother to fuck there Bisexual Pussies to mindblowing orgasms,not forced sex.Oh and it would have been sweet if Tammy and Vickie were both fertile and unprotected and were ready to have Andy's Babies preferably girls so when they grew up the Dad could knock them up too,that would be so beautiful.