All Comments on 'Stepdad'

Appreciate the build up. Most stories just jump right in. Looking forward to where you take this.

Omg great story just was expecting it to end so sudden!

is there going to be a part 2?

I like this very much. I hope you continue!

Where does this go from here? Here's an idea: Rather than just have a routine fuck story with her fucking her stepdad, let's have him ease Mom into the storyline. They let daughter watch and they explore their growing relationship.

How about this? Daughter grows accustomed to families' casual sex while Mom draws daughter into pleasuring wildly aroused Stepdad. Then she helps him do Mom anal. Yeah! That's cool! They finish with a consensual three-way....

So many phrases done wrong. Look up the word "mythed." Please get an Editor.

It's like you tried to hard to put in some street lingo and used an urban dictionary just to "try" to sound cool. You failed.

Would like more.

I loved your story and if you need any help at all then contact me. I will help you. Even editor's make mistakes and none of us is perfect. I make mistakes myself sometimes if I am not really careful

LOVED IT!!

This made me come like I hadn't in a month. I am so jealous of Derrick. And the daughter is so fucking hot. Keep on baby

This is gonna be AWESOME!.....

This is too funny!! :). We're definately playing in fantasy make-believe land today boys and girls! ...from the fake Balls Aching/Blueballs myth (only tight jeans or kicked in the nuts folks!) to the stream of precum running down like a leaky faucet, then of course the AmaZing Super-Soaker Cum Spraying Phallus Gun!! Hehehe ;).

I'm not a chick, but can you imagine what that much hot cum sprayed up into your pussy would feel like?! I imagine in the next chapter or two we might find out! Hehehe! Hey, Im surprised she didn't LiCk up any of his cum before she started cleaning! ...then he just left, wow. I know typically after you cum (guys anyway) you pretty much lose most of your interest in doing anything else (unless you think you can get it up again) but damn, he didnt even try and lick thst dripping pussy! Guess he was turned off by her attitude. Heh

Well lets see what fun the next chapter brings, hopefully there is one!

Is there a part 2

Loved it. I like when stories have some teasing and forplay