All Comments on 'Steph and Giulia Ch. 01: The Betrayal'

Why not just introduce Mickry Mouse, Daffy fucking Duck and the entire cast of Scooby Doo along with this exercise in comedy?

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What utterly childish rubbish! And what the fuck is it doing in LOVING WIVES?! Not one fucking wife in the garbage I just wasted my time on.

What this story isn't: 1st - it isn't a LW story...No wife in it, not even fiancee or girlfriend...2nd - This isn't even a good story, and I don't refer to the writing, only to the plot and characters...What this story is: Is no doubt a gay story...Much lower than the possible 1*...

...and, he's an idiot and she's a skank

Not worth the time spent to read it.

That was fucking bad.

Congratulations on possibly the worst story ever written.

Gay male, surely?

Your writing is juvenile and would need a LOT of development before putting it up publicly. I would suggest you practise a lot of stories for a couple of years at least before posting again.

You say you are 40-50 but the writing leaves the impression of a kid writing.

Fuck what the negative e commentors are saying. I want part 2 real soon. Got my dick extra hard.

/faggots!

another pile of dung thrown into loving wives.

Really fucking good story! Can't wait for chapter 2, but this may not be the right category for this story.

if these people would be simply eliminated.

and to say fuck you dear annony!!!!!

Dicksuckers shld post their shit wh it belongs.h I v come and get them.

You seem to be in the wrong universe. Gay male or group sex, not LW

I liked the story. I liked the mixure of straight & bi sexuality.

Stephen's life won't be easy but in the long run he may be a happy camper provided he finds his niche in terms of lifestyle & sexual orientation.

The story deals with the stage of Stephen's life where he is still in search of his true self, in the process of self discovery.

I am looking forward to reading Ch. 2 & 3. Haven't read those chapters yet but my prediction is that Alex will pop Stephen's ass cherry. Alex has an AC/DC side himself (but his one is way less pronounced than Stephen's). Alex will have a prominent spot in Stephen's fantasy world because Guilia let him have his way with her.

Have read all six chapters. Have enjoyed them all. Please continue writing the story. Looking forward for the next chapter.

Great start on a very interesting story. I can't wait to see where you go with this Story.