All Comments on 'Stephanie'

Rambling, confusing, drivel. Utter waste of time.

I haven't read any of your other work but I'm definitely going to check it out. Some of it was a little confusing because I wasn't familiar with the characters but you already warned me of that at the beginning. I'm really intrigued to find out more about this extraordinary family and the planets they came from. Can't wait!

I really just need to post the entire series all at once. Unfortunately the whole thing with all the perspective is a little over 600,000 words . . . so yeah I might need a little help with that one.

You're just kind of thrown into the story with no explanation of the world or the people involved. Then after the haircut, one moment she's talking about payment and the next she's leaving for her other trip, no connecting sentences, no obvious transitions. Other parts were just as difficult to follow.