All Comments on 'Stephanie Wants to be Seen Pt. 01'

by alittlecloser69

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writerlywriterlyover 8 years ago
Great job

That was a lot of fun! Looking forward to more!

C

billywooldridgebillywooldridgeover 8 years ago
more please

Yes definitely more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Can't wait for more

Please keep writing! I love the water park scene.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Four Years Ago ...

Thought I better read this before starting on Pt. 2. If the dates correct, it's a long time between parts. Anyway, this one excellently demonstrates that a simple plot with limited characters, if well written, doesn't require multiple pages to be very erotic.

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