All Comments on 'Stepmother Takes Charge'

by WhiteWolfStories

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redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

this site needs a pussy whipped sissy boy section for crap like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
No more please

I truly hope there is NOT a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story

Well written, don't let others knock you down because they dont like the content. This is a great start to a story!

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 10 years ago
A nice story, well-written

I hope you will ignore the critics and continue with this story - I thought it was excellent. Welcome to Literotica and thank you for sharing your work with us - and remember - it takes all sorts to make a world and those grown-up enough to read stories here should be grown-up enough to appreciate that. Five stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
very good

looking forward to more just loved it yours leann

Lonewolf2013Lonewolf2013over 10 years ago
What a piece of crap

When the subject of the story is crap then it doesn't matter how well you write it still ends up being crap. The step-mother is a twisted bitch. I hope you try again but next time don't start with crap.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Misleading Description

Boy got caught with sister's panties. Stepmother (and probably the rest of the household) humiliates him. I do not see where the misunderstanding?

TheKrrakTheKrrakover 10 years ago
Not bad for a first effort

Eagerly awaiting more from you on this, needs some polish to be sure but it's a good start - 4/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A fun story

A good premise but you went too far too fast. Quite a few lads have been caught with mom's or sis' panties. Reactions vary, but discipline is required.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

please more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
I've been waiting for a sequel for 5 months! plz more

I've been waiting for a sequel for 5 months! plz more

WhiteWolfStoriesWhiteWolfStoriesover 9 years agoAuthor
Hilarious

Never even bothered to come back and look at the comments. The trash talkers made me laugh. For those asking for more I guess I can attempt to revisit this. Seem to think o started part 2 already. Will have to see if I can find it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Sequel

I can't wait to see what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
don't bother writing another story

this was shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Go and hang yourself dude. no need for your wimpass story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Degradation and humiliation aren't my thing

As stated above those fetish aren't my thing, the mental and/or physical destruction of a man/woman is not erotic to me. Good writing style though. 1.5 out of 5.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please continue

I find this story highly arousing and would love to read much more. Simply wonderful.

Motherlessone77Motherlessone77almost 3 years ago

if this was real life vengeance would come so slow to that step mother. Talking the kinda torture that would make her beg for death.

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