by WhiteWolfStories
Well written, don't let others knock you down because they dont like the content. This is a great start to a story!
I hope you will ignore the critics and continue with this story - I thought it was excellent. Welcome to Literotica and thank you for sharing your work with us - and remember - it takes all sorts to make a world and those grown-up enough to read stories here should be grown-up enough to appreciate that. Five stars from me.
When the subject of the story is crap then it doesn't matter how well you write it still ends up being crap. The step-mother is a twisted bitch. I hope you try again but next time don't start with crap.
Boy got caught with sister's panties. Stepmother (and probably the rest of the household) humiliates him. I do not see where the misunderstanding?
Eagerly awaiting more from you on this, needs some polish to be sure but it's a good start - 4/5
A good premise but you went too far too fast. Quite a few lads have been caught with mom's or sis' panties. Reactions vary, but discipline is required.
I've been waiting for a sequel for 5 months! plz more
Never even bothered to come back and look at the comments. The trash talkers made me laugh. For those asking for more I guess I can attempt to revisit this. Seem to think o started part 2 already. Will have to see if I can find it.
As stated above those fetish aren't my thing, the mental and/or physical destruction of a man/woman is not erotic to me. Good writing style though. 1.5 out of 5.
I find this story highly arousing and would love to read much more. Simply wonderful.
if this was real life vengeance would come so slow to that step mother. Talking the kinda torture that would make her beg for death.