All Comments on 'Stepping Out in Faith Ch. 01'

by hudsbart

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bambam1234bambam1234over 8 years ago
more!

may I have some more please SIR? this is hot and I can't wait to find out if Father Andy is Catholic or Protestant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great start! PLEASE keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I anxiously scrolled up at the and to check if there is something like "Ch. 01" in the name and thank God there is...this needs to be continued!!! It has been a while since a story plot really surprised me...Great idea!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Yes, please do give us more. It was a great start. I can't help but speculate, perhaps he's Episcopalian? :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

So happy to see a story from you! I can tell this is going to be good! Please write more. I'm super excited to read the rest

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loved it!

Very good writing and I can't wait to see where this story goes! Thank you for it!

baikalisanbaikalisanover 8 years ago
Rarely

Do I give 5 ⭐️ But this story has certainly started out in the fast lane! Caught and held my interest and I cannot wait to read more!!

Thank you for submitting this 😍

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very nice!!!

Yowza, what an opening chapter! Can't wait for the next one. What will Father Dylan do now? very, very good.

LovelySnailLovelySnailover 8 years ago
More! MOAR!!

The only thing I can say besides "5 deserved stars" is MOAR!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good read

Until the end, this was one of the "best" stories I have read! I sure hope you will continue writing as the ending is not sitting well in my mind!

jeansguyjeansguyover 8 years ago

Outstanding! And I rarely say that about a story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

pinktickalerpinktickalerover 8 years ago
great!

Got to write more to this.... lots more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
breathless

Please keep this story going. Some of us love your style, plus ur not rushing the characters. The

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
complicated already

bad boy vs virgin angel - corruption or salvation, holding on to who you are - to be who you are, dichotomy all over the place, great start, set up the complexity of the characters, their situation, challenges and hearts - where are they going next and at what point do have they have to meet in their backgrounds for a future relationship - nice opening, more more more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fucking hot

Fuck yeah. Sexy. So sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

loved the foreshadowing that first night with Andy's tight collar - you are an excellent writer.

Headhunter22Headhunter22about 5 years ago
I'm hooked!!

Loved this chapter.

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