by hudsbart
may I have some more please SIR? this is hot and I can't wait to find out if Father Andy is Catholic or Protestant.
I anxiously scrolled up at the and to check if there is something like "Ch. 01" in the name and thank God there is...this needs to be continued!!! It has been a while since a story plot really surprised me...Great idea!
Yes, please do give us more. It was a great start. I can't help but speculate, perhaps he's Episcopalian? :-)
So happy to see a story from you! I can tell this is going to be good! Please write more. I'm super excited to read the rest
Very good writing and I can't wait to see where this story goes! Thank you for it!
Do I give 5 ⭐️ But this story has certainly started out in the fast lane! Caught and held my interest and I cannot wait to read more!!
Thank you for submitting this 😍
Yowza, what an opening chapter! Can't wait for the next one. What will Father Dylan do now? very, very good.
The only thing I can say besides "5 deserved stars" is MOAR!!!
Until the end, this was one of the "best" stories I have read! I sure hope you will continue writing as the ending is not sitting well in my mind!
Outstanding! And I rarely say that about a story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Please keep this story going. Some of us love your style, plus ur not rushing the characters. The
bad boy vs virgin angel - corruption or salvation, holding on to who you are - to be who you are, dichotomy all over the place, great start, set up the complexity of the characters, their situation, challenges and hearts - where are they going next and at what point do have they have to meet in their backgrounds for a future relationship - nice opening, more more more
loved the foreshadowing that first night with Andy's tight collar - you are an excellent writer.