All Comments on 'Stepping Out in Faith Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW

Speachless

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Beautiful!

That was amazing., sexy and just wow. Loved the 1st chapter so much and this lived up to it. Shew I hope Andy finds his truth fast, cause the potential heartache here...Thank you. Looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Just

Awesome.

Loved this line: "I'm Catholic. It's my job to feel guilty." Andy snorted, "Literally."

So true. Been there. Done that. Andy has a long journey to throw off the shackles of Catholic guilt. It requires a different kind of faith. Not the faith in the Catholic God of punishment, but in a God of love.

kitty198kitty198over 8 years ago
wow

I really enjoyed the first chapter but I love this one it was so perfect and intense I hope andy will come to terms with being gay him and marcus both need eachother I cant wait for more

jeansguyjeansguyover 8 years ago

OUTSTANDING! 'nough said. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

So amazing!!! I'm in love with this story like Marcus is with andy. I know they have a long road ahead of them but I hope they end up happy

baikalisanbaikalisanover 8 years ago
5⭐️

It was just THAT GOOD

mftz1mftz1over 8 years ago

Wonderful. Beautifully romantic.

thephoenixhostthephoenixhostover 8 years ago
Amazing

This is really a good story. I felt Andy's pain when he shared his story. I feel bad about how those children can be so violent. I blame media for that. Violence, sex and drugs are readily available in almosy all medium and sometimes we are not vigilant in exposing them to these.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Happy

When i saw you had Updated chapter two i felt ao happy. I love this story and i really hope you'll be posting more. This is now my favourite story and you are on my top three list.. great job

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsover 8 years ago
Such a beautiful story!

Thank you for continuing to share it with us.

chrisunderchrisunderover 8 years ago
Love it! Two tumbs up!

This story just wormed itself in to my heart.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Two beautiful for words!

I await the next chapter with the full expectation I will not be disappointed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Amazing!

I wasn't prepared for this story to affect me so deeply. I am a straight woman, and can claim without reserve that I have never connected so deeply a story. Thank you. Thank you.

AfrikanAfrikanover 8 years ago
Awesome

An awesome story you got going. Hope the next chapter will be up soon.

canndcanndover 8 years ago
5*'s

this is such a beautiful story. You really bring out the emotions of your characters and draw the reader in. I hope that these two are able to find their way to one another for good. Hopefully you're a HEA type of author!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
falling for andy too

Both men are being brave in going forward, Marcus for accepting the future wont be easy but ready to love and take it on, and Andy too for facing his guilty past and finding his own identify and love he deserves

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOWSA!!!

you write sex wonderfully!! I think i came. No kidding. This story is awesome!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Wow

That sex was epic. I wanted him to flood Andy's well-fucked virgin ass. Fucking fuck him hard and fill his tight ass with man cum. Fucking fuck his clenched hole with his hot fuck juice. Fucking drink the fucking cum out of Andy's delicious hole. Stick his fucking fat tongue up inside Andy and taste himself. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck.

ProerosProerosover 8 years ago
Best ever.

I am in love with you. I wish I could be fucked like Marcus fucked Andy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow

A gay priest? Goodbye

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Gotta agree with the commenters below: WOW

Cane23Cane237 months ago

This was one of the best graphic descriptions of love making. So erotic and sensual, so hot...really fantastic!

MidnightShriekMidnightShriek6 months ago

I hope they can go see ole dude in the home

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