All Comments on 'Steve & Sally's First Swing'

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swingerjoeswingerjoeover 9 years ago
Short, but sweet

This story could use a little more detail regarding the thoughts and emotions of all the characters involved. I feel like you omitted both the beginning and end of this story. What motivated Steve and Sally to begin swinging in the first place? And what happened after this encounter?

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