All Comments on 'Steve Gets His Chance at the End'

If I read 'hottie' one more time, I'll scream! Also, you very much need and editor.

This is one that could go several ways... But it was all consensual, nobody's feelings got hurt, Steve definitely got his chance at the end (nice pun, by the way), and it finished up smoothly and leaving us looking for more.

Good job.

when I got to the fifth "cute hottie." **