All Comments on 'Steve Meets A Cougar Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
good

well done! keep going, but leave his mother out of it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
good start

Good start, keep it going. But I think his mother would be next with his new found confidence. Maybe even a 3sum after she accidentally walks in on one of their web chats

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good, with some flaws

Leave his parents out of it. Reading about a parent dying at the beginning of the story weakens the erotic aspect of it.

Kiriodes94Kiriodes94almost 10 years ago

Really hot story, Can't wait for Ch. 2

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