All Comments on 'Steve Mows Mrs. Johnson's Lawn'

You didn't take this very far. Has so much potential.

This seems to have been written by a young teenager with no experience - in writing or sex!

Shortness aside, and it has been done before ( boy mows lawn) your story read easily.

Have Steve come back for a repeat performance. Can he have a bit of chest hair for Mrs. Johnson to ogle and perhaps taste?

Could have had a lot more detail. Simple one would be to know her first name!!!!

Did he trim her bush too? Did he lick the cheese off that taco?

I kept waiting to see where the ol' girl hid his lawn mowing money . In her bra ? No . In her thong ? No. In her teeth , on the dresser ? Nope . She stiffed him ! xD

she hired to fix up her older home that

needed a lot of work, including the entire

plumbing system, and her old bathroom.

she was in her early 60's but her body

reminded me of a woman that was 25

or 26 years old. even though her hair

was turning gray, her rosy red lips were

very kissable. as we laid down on her

bathroom floor and I undressed her, her

body had very few wrinkles on it. I

found out that she had been married

twice, and had only one child. Her

present husband had a small, skinny

cock that couldn't give her a good fuck.

I never asked her for any cash for the

work that I did, instead I used her small

tight pussy, night after night for twelve

wonderful years. She had the sweetest

pussy I ever tasted. eventually, I was able

to do more work in her old farm house, until

she passed away at the age of 82. I MISS HER.

and then they spoke unfortunately. It was a nice touch to have the woman with no first name towel the sweat from his body. Very erotic. But when the action heated up the dialogue was a big disappointment as it was just not believable at all. And then the sex was rushed to the extremes if they were in a race. Sadly just not a good effort. As a previous commenter noted the story reads as if the author had never had sex before. Don't know if that's accurate but I see the commenter's point.