by trixiej
yum, yum, yum... fabulous writing...really a step above the norm,,, great pace and delivery, acurate, authoritive and enthralling... deserves a six
Loved the story and your skill in writing it. Your first paragraphs really drew me in and made me want to read more. Good characterization and beautiful, realistic descriptions. Very well done!
Fantastic- beautifully written, utterly convincing and incredibly erotic- I loved it!
enjoyed the story very much. Interesting characters, interesting development. Thanks!
This story has got to be one of the best bi-curious I've read. The author, with whom I am familiar, relates not only her thoughts but the actual sensations very well. I got hard very quickly and will 'use' this story again and again!
hot, curious seduction. I love the teasing and the tension as it builds to climax. Thanks.