by infructescence
HOT! Not sure I'll ever look at a candy cane the same way again. Not sure I'll be able to keep a straight face either...as I'm sucking on one. Yum! Good Luck!
~Luna
Sloppy work needs description of main characters; not only physical but also personal. Also poor choice of sex site as unknown who could enter the scene or why no one was looking for either one. Recommend thought be entered into next work.
Somehow, I don't think shoving a candy cane up someone's twat is a particularly good way to initiate them into sapphic sex. This sounds like something two girls who've known each other for a while might try out for a change of pace, not the way an experienced lesbian would initiate a girl who was, apparently, a virgin to any kind of sex.
For all that, the descriptions were hot. A bit devoid of personality, however. A little humor is never amiss!
I thought this story was hot. I got aroused.
My only complaint is that ends abruptly. We needed a bit more of these two hot women.
that's not very smart to put candy canes or any food into a vagina. that's how you get infections.