All Comments on 'Still Figuring It Out'

Hi,

That sound like it could be the start of a nice line of chapters.

Has potential!

Very nice!

But don't rush the plot if you are planning on writing some more chapters.

You could have dragged this part out a bit too.

But still! Nice work!

Nice work, looking forward to the next chapter if you are planning on that.

I enjoyed the thought put into the story. I think with a little more thought and more details all around this would be a great mind control story. Please continue, I want to see what happens next.