by Egmont Grigor
Nothing better than putting your cock between a lovely pair of womens legs preferably your mothers and rubbing against her wet silk panties:sorry the story excellent.
This surely has the possibility of running ( no stocking pun intended ) a little while longer. There's Chrome to see to and the visit from "Mummy"!
So why is this in "fetish?" Very little about stockings and considering it was 5 pages long very little amusement. If you want us to believe he came to America perhaps it would be better if your vernacular matched the people speaking?? It was confusing trying to understand Chrome, a supposedly cool American babe, speaking like a proper Brit. This was a major disappointment.
Oh dear 08/29/07 by Anonymous in USA. 00 points? I guess that sums up your value as a critic. Grumpy too. Doesn't know the meaning of Fetish either. The exact category is Soft Fetish. I enjoyed writing it, so there. Chrome puzzled me as well, as some people do it real life. By the way, not all residents of the USA speak the lingo as you might expect. EG cultured Americans with an international outlook. I lived a couple of months in Carmel, California, and met several.
I would love you to write a sequel,how he has managed to control himself I do not know,I WOULD HAVE BEEN UP THIS AMERICAN CRUMPET FASTER THAN A RAT UP A SEWER.Incidently we do not apologise for being ENGLISH.
You almost need a scorecard to know who is sleeping with whom. I certainly appreciate the humor you inject into your stories.
Boyd
Every now and again a priceless jewel of writing comes up on this site ,this is one of them.It would make an extremely good film.How about a sequel,this really is to good to abandon.
Boring, tedious built-up, flat climax, esp on such a delicate subject as " stocking seduction ", Must keep hard track who is this Brit punk seducing esp with his historical posh, arrogant, inaudible " lingo" even to Cali vally girls bimboes!!!
Mixed review. Too many characters; too repetitive. It would have been more interesting story with half the characters and half the action.