All Comments on 'Stoking Inferno Ch. 01'

by JoanofArkham

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneabout 11 years ago
Wow!

That was pretty hot stuff for a debut piece, JoanofArkham! Very well done and thank you for joining us; I hope there will be many more excellent stories to follow this one - five stars.

MaynessMaynessabout 11 years ago

Wonderful first chapter, well done. Thank you.

IWantToGiveInIWantToGiveInabout 11 years ago
Great story

I hope you continue--this is a very good start and I am a very finicky reader!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
A positive start

I am aroused and nervous beside her, and eager to see where you take this. Wonderful first story. 5*

Prof_EmmaProf_Emmaabout 11 years ago
Lovely beginning!

Thank you for this well-written, intriguing story. Her nervous excitement is palpable. You've laid a wonderful foundation, and I look forward to what comes next. And learning more about the characters.

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