by JoanofArkham
That was pretty hot stuff for a debut piece, JoanofArkham! Very well done and thank you for joining us; I hope there will be many more excellent stories to follow this one - five stars.
I hope you continue--this is a very good start and I am a very finicky reader!
I am aroused and nervous beside her, and eager to see where you take this. Wonderful first story. 5*
Thank you for this well-written, intriguing story. Her nervous excitement is palpable. You've laid a wonderful foundation, and I look forward to what comes next. And learning more about the characters.