All Comments on 'Stoking the Fire Ch. 01'

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BarbaraBarbaraover 13 years ago
Wow! -Voted a 5 - Enjoying 'Anal' sex has no equals, in my personal 'bottom' opinion?

Keep writing about your experiences, contacting me if you need further inspirations? Do you ever fancy group sex, getting into 'FMF' middles, for added sexual variety? Feel free to correspond, with this geriatric lady, by E/Mail!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great romance story

This beautifully written chapter has a carefully built introduction, with good character development, and an engaging plot from the first sentence to the last. Excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great premise

But the sex doesn't live up to its potential. Things move along too fast. Needs to be stretched out with many more details.

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