All Comments on 'Stolen'

This is really REALLY REALLY GOOD. Need more please.

Please follow up with add on. Like your style

Very good style, engaging world building and that touch of wry narrative that lightens the mood. :) Do continue!

I very much hope that you continue this. I am impressed.

Really well written story. Not sure I'm a big fan of the male protagonist now becoming a female protagonist. Just a personal preference thing. Yet, I'm still curious about what direction you'll take the story.

Thanks for posting!

This story is off to a very interesting start. I look forward to seeing where you take things!

A well written story is a treat. Thanks for posting this.

Another story to add to the list that I'm waiting with baited breath for a new chapter. Love your writing style. Interesting world and characters, grateful that your first chapter was a good length and didn't end on a cliffhanger. Please continue.

Thanks for all the comments. I am pleased and surprised that folks seem to enjoy my first shared story.

Parts 2 and 3 are currently with the editor who is busy at the moment.

I know the subject matter of this story isn't everyone's cup of tea and I appreciate the feedback.

I love the story! I have no criticism constructive or otherwise. I actually made this account just to comment about how much I loved this story and how eager I am to read the follow up.

It's got great potential. Keep going.

This is a VERY nice start, keep on writing! I wanna know what happens to the new lovely little factotum.~

Excellent story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Some types do not even exist on the Internet. WTF

Really enjoyed what you've started. Can't wait to see where you take it next!

This is an excellent story. The ending is such a tease, I would love to see more. I feel like we're just about to get to the good part. :)

I love the world you created with lillith, crusader, and catalyst. I can see a lot of effort in this piece. I hope to see the next part soon. Maybe with the new catalyst that turn female to male. Just my two cents, thanks.

yep good start poor exicution as far as lenght goes...

Really phenomenal writing and content, even the world building is solid which is hard to do in a single chapter. I hope the author keeps this story going, it's up there with the best so far in my humble opinion. If you enjoy excellent literotica with succubi, this is a must read.

This story is one of few that can be considered good or great, I rated five stars and hope the next chapter is on the way :))

Nicely written with a good base setup for the next chapters. I look forward to seeing where your creativity takes us.

Don't keep us hanging too long.....

I was hooked from the first page. The creation of a world of succubi and the change from man to woman and being a catalyst to boot gives us all something to look forward to as you further develop the story. I really look forward to reading more

enjoyable start. fast. developing chars and world. looking forward to chap 2!

I love your elaborate setting with its lush array of description and lore. This is so much more than just a sex story, it's an actually compelling story that makes me care about the characters and want to see what happens next. Often times I'll just skin a story to see what it has to offer but I was enraptured in yours from the very beginning. I cant wait to see where it goes ^_^

my only beef with this story is that it isn't real... I'd love to have this happen to me, so what if i'll essentially be bound to a futanari sex-demon... it sounds like most succubi treat them well :)

rated it 5 :D

Could you please continue to write! The story drew me in and I had to finish it without stopping... I want to read so much more of it!

Incomplete, total waste of time. It just rambles on, trudging on in circles. Then just ends, it even fucks that up as it has no ending.

Don’t bother.

Love the story keep it up cant wait for the next part

What a ride...Thanks!

No idea how this unfinished pile got such high ratings

Where is the rest of this story

You posses great skill.

Great another stupid author. Hey author put a tag at the beginning of your stupid story if you don't have the brains to do that then more people will end up giving 1 stars because we don't want to read this type of crap. While I respect everyone's opinion I think I shouldn't have to wast time in a story just like this just to find out is a type of story I hate. Get your head out of your ass and grow some balls and put tags in the beginning of your story.

Or you could stop being an entitled baby Lema86, and stop reading when you discover it's not for you

This is an amazing story, and it just keeps getting better and better.

Thank you for another stimulating story and I can't wait to read the next part. I wouldn't mind being her for a moment .. Wow ..

This is a classic, I always come back to every few months.

What an awesome story. The use of fabled history mixed with demonology is brilliant. I would love to see this hugely expanded and made into a book and/or film. Spectacular piece of work and very well written. Thanks for all the work you put into this.