Stolen Birthright Ch. 06-09

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With all the hugging done, Luna Remi herded us all towards the Pack dining room. The majority of the members ate in the huge room, and all immediately quieted when we walked towards the elevated platform on one end. "Today we welcome Alpha Ella Grey, niece of Luna Remi, along with her Beta, Darryl, and members Marge and Mabel. Please extend them our hospitality." There was a cheer and we could make out some well wishes as we sat down.

"I appreciate the thought, Aunt Remi, but I'm not an Alpha." I looked down at my injured hand, which was starting to throb again.

Doug laughed. "You aren't Alpha because of blood or battle. You are Alpha because wolves follow you and recognize you as such." He looked at the people with me.

"Alpha."

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Ravey19Ravey19almost 2 years ago

Developing nicely. Ella's got to get her revenge but how will it all work out. Can she find a mate that will recreate the wolf in her? Or is that not possible once it's been killed? And what about Mark?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I can't rate this. I mean, the main ingredients - danger, hiding from it, revenge etc - are not my favourites, can't really say I like that. But you write damn well.

(Before this I just decided not to try reading the were war series for a similar reason. Which is sad, as it a long series and would be plenty of quality reading.)

skippersdadskippersdadover 2 years ago

I love the way you put feeling into the characters ,I am glad I found it.

ausvirgoausvirgoover 4 years ago
What can I say? Your stories are still fantastic!

I suppose I could have a go at your editor for not knowing that "licking" is not spelt "liking", although it seems that Mark was both licking and liking.

I'm wondering whether Ella Grey not having used protection is going to factor into the story or not, but I'll find out soon, since the rest of the story is already written.

cantfightfatecantfightfatealmost 7 years ago
I'm not usually one for revenge...

An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind, and all that... but in this case, I'm looking forward to Ella destroying these bastards.

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