All Comments on 'Stolen Moments'

by Dopeydora

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sherlock40sherlock40almost 19 years ago
Yes, let it be the end.

It looked like a wonderful love story until the end, when we find out the wife and brother have committed the worst form of cuckolding they can against a man. Why didn't she dump her husband before this happened? Why betray him so totally?

beesfanbeesfanalmost 19 years ago
Nice.

Nicely written, feel-good, erotic and sexy story until shot to hell by the 'surprise' ending. Why was that necessary, I ask? I fear descent into poor dumb cuckold bringing up somemone else's (his brother's!!) child territory if you continue. Some may encourage you to do that. Not me! Just my opinion!

super_sonikkusuper_sonikkualmost 19 years ago
Nicely written, Dopeydora ...

This story got me all nice, hard and horny. Mmm ... I hope you write more like this. The end was a surprise, yes, but it was an interesting one.

Imme26Imme26over 17 years ago
Loved it!

Really enjoyable, especially the twist at the end!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

The twist in d end was unexpected n great! Thumbs up!!"

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