by Dopeydora
It looked like a wonderful love story until the end, when we find out the wife and brother have committed the worst form of cuckolding they can against a man. Why didn't she dump her husband before this happened? Why betray him so totally?
Nicely written, feel-good, erotic and sexy story until shot to hell by the 'surprise' ending. Why was that necessary, I ask? I fear descent into poor dumb cuckold bringing up somemone else's (his brother's!!) child territory if you continue. Some may encourage you to do that. Not me! Just my opinion!
This story got me all nice, hard and horny. Mmm ... I hope you write more like this. The end was a surprise, yes, but it was an interesting one.