All Comments on 'Stop the World to Get a Better View Ch. 05'

fucking crap sorry is this

You are commenting on my writing when you are totally unable to manage a complete sentence.

Comments like that have no place here, when fledgling authors are presenting their work. Please keep on with your writing, Kaiden, because likely as not, the commenter will not have made submissions of stories themselves. Comments do indeed cover a range of views, but it seems that some folk have a real problem with themselves, and feel the need to release their bile on authors.