All Comments on 'Store Security'

I'd like to see him get back at the Mayor - maybe blackmail him, fuck his wife and daughter, then run for Sheriff with the Mayor's money and end up running the department?

First chapter was good and then you went juvenile. Damn I thought you had a good storyline going. Try again good luck.

I came to that and im not a big fan of watersports. Nice one.

Excellent build up - from a righteous to a WTF! Enjoy reading every word. Thanks

The story would have been better if the mc had gotten some "real" revenge like against the mayor.