by Melissa000
If this is your first story, outstanding. Please continue with more, you have made a great start.
I don't even know where to begin, but I can say this: please keep writing more stories for Chris!
Okay... now I'm dying to know... what happened to the other two girls??
Maybe just lead up to the sex a little less abruptly and introduce the characters more. This wants to be more than just a "stroke story". Excellent erotic writng with good description!
I bookmarked your story a few months ago and have been waiting to read more. I hope you are still writing. Please do.