All Comments on 'Stories For Chris Ch. 01'

by Melissa000

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MJOMJOover 19 years ago
Great start

If this is your first story, outstanding. Please continue with more, you have made a great start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Oh my god!

I don't even know where to begin, but I can say this: please keep writing more stories for Chris!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
HOT

Okay... now I'm dying to know... what happened to the other two girls??

sacksackover 19 years ago
Good start....

Maybe just lead up to the sex a little less abruptly and introduce the characters more. This wants to be more than just a "stroke story". Excellent erotic writng with good description!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Will you write more?

I bookmarked your story a few months ago and have been waiting to read more. I hope you are still writing. Please do.

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