All Comments on 'Storm'

Not pornographic enough, though it was a good try.

The imagery is outstanding! As a straight woman, I was captivated by the descriptions & my imagination did the rest. I give a big raspberry to the naysayers who think this isn't enough. Seems they don't know that the brain is the biggest sex organ we've got! Keep up the great work & continue to make us use our organs!! (although a little actual action would be appreciated, too - *grin*)

Steamy like the stormy humid night. The visuals your words painted are fantastic. Keep on writing more please

Who cares? Your story is non-story. It has no character development or story line. There is nothing interesting here. Is this a weatherman’s jack off material? It is someone’s weather fetish. Again, who cares?