Storm of Shadows Ch. 03

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"What I am doing isn't dream walking in the traditional sense. We don't know what it's called to be honest. I just know I was in my early teens when I realised that I had an uncanny knack for knowing when someone was lying to me. I learned from my father that some of the old Vampire Council used to be able to do it, but my uncle somehow managed to block them from knowing when he lied. I didn't pay much attention to this skill at the time but with things moving so rapidly back home, I decided it was best if I honed it as soon as I could."

She paused, breathing in deeply and closing her eyes as she felt along a pathway. "We discovered that not only could I sense if someone was lying to me, but that I could walk within a mind and discover any falsehood, no matter how well it was hidden. There is nowhere anyone can hide from me, and my strength is growing on a daily basis."

Her voice trailed off and she sat back, slowly opening her eyes to meet his. "Who is Dante?"

To be continued...

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ChasingtheSkyChasingtheSkyabout 7 years ago

Love your writing.

Love this storyline.

Have fallen in love with these characters!

Thank you for giving us such a wonderful gift.

SenieceTaOSenieceTaOalmost 8 years ago
*****

Jaz you are truly gifted... love your writings... I may not comment a lot but I never fail to vote and 5 stars is never enough. Thankyou for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
A Big 5

You are at the top of your game.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Magnificent stories!

I love your stories and I am hoping that we will be reading chapter 4 soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
4?

SOS 4?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Mental abilities

So far in the previous story (Tears of the Fallen) and in this story we have seen that three of the hybrid children have mental abilities. Elina can shield other minds, Liam is a dream walker and Dara can detect lies. Does this mean that Liliana, Kallum and Cassia have mental abilities, too? If so, I look forward to reading about what they can do.

Speaking of Elina, she should be free to live her own life and develop her abilities now that Reasa has taught Liam how to shield his mind.

Someone asked in another comment if Dara is Kothari's mate. She's not; according to the prophecy in Chapter 18 of Tears of the Fallen, Kothari's mate is somewhere in Europe and he has not yet met her.

Lydia121101Lydia121101over 8 years ago
when is the next chapter coming????

jaz we want next one purty please with a cherry on top? and coffee next to it...purty please???? love your stories too much!!!

Lydia

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Loving this story so far...

...but something feels a little off. It could be that we're still stuck in what feels like the introduction? I'm not sure. It's a little disappointing that the updates are so slow because I love these characters and there is still so much we have to learn about them. Not to mention all of the exciting plot line possibilities there are to explore. I hope that you are able to find the time to continue this because I- as well as many others- would love to see more of this! Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
next chapter pls

it's been a long wait, Jaz more pls

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Its a little concerning that your last update was in September and it is now November. Just got back into reading your stories and I was so happy you had updated so much! Not looking forward to the wait for the next chapters though! I am totally invested in the story!!!

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