All Comments on 'Storm World Ch. 04'

Thank you for another great chapter. This is easily worth 5 stars.

Very glad to have you back and writing! I really like and appreciate your work. Thank you very much, I'm looking forward to more of your stories.

Knew you were busy with your job, but was really starting to miss your storytelling. Made my morning to see your posting of this newest chapter. Thanks!

Thanks, I needed that.

While waiting for a new chapter I went back and read savage shores. I read a comment about bowoodstock he has no chance to your writing

While it is kinda saddening that I can't just read the whole story at my own pace. Such a well thought out and written story is definitely worth the wait. Keep up the good work, Ripper

I'm more than a lot glad to see you writing again. When you said you were leaving Literotica, I was disappointed. But glad you are back now, and with a very good story so far. I love your descriptions for everything. I definitely have a sense that i'm actually there.

I've only just realized your genius in establishing Benjamin's background as Free World Confederation. It completely explains the continued existence of an ancient language like Japanese so far into the future, as well giving him the open-mindedness to socially accept a group of (to him) completely unfamiliar aliens.

Given that he already speaks (at least) two languages, it will be interesting to see how quickly he picks up...jZav?, considering his current circumstances.

UaSS' main character speaks German.

Although it does bring up the question of whether or not Japanese or English is harder for a jZav'Etch to speak.

I know in UaSS ripper said that it would be hard for humans to speak some of the cat language and vice versa. I wonder what that limitation is, but this seems like the type of story where that might be revealed

It's getting better and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Will this be as good as Savage Shores? It seems to be getting there.

you need to write some more

I am liking this series so far and I wish the pages would be a bit longer... Anyways, keep up the good work! And keep chugging them out!

Really enjoy your writing endeavors...keeping it sequential is really working for this storyline also...looking forward to the oncoming chapters...don´t worry ´bout the time it takes you to come back, just come back often hahaha. I´ll be here to read ´em.

Great to see you return to post more chapters. I have been greatly looking forward to your return

I never got the feeling that he does speak German, especially because the main character's name is Liam Carter.

Can you tell me where it was said?

Greetings G

UaSS! I'm also really liking the way this story line is shaping up. I'm loving the commander character and crazy Benjamin. Great job!!!

If you write them, I will read them.

Not much going on. Not talking about jerk scenes. 4 chapters and they have barely moved through cave. Haven’t learned anything about Ben or he them. It’s a good story so far. Wish it moved a little faster.

Kind of a slow buildup and covering many different characters makes it a little difficult to get into. Hoping it will pickup some more story in the next chapters.

Plain = flat surface of land or grassland. Such as the American Great Plains or the Russian Steppes.

Plane = a flat geometric surface or a craft one flies in. Such as a Boeing 747 airplane.

A dictionary would be of great help to you with these terms.

Just a passing thought.