by CeruleanZeeman
I loved this please write more, lol... how about something with Emmett and Rosalie!!
You really captured the characters! The back and forth POVs were tough at first, but it all came together very well. Please, please, PLEASE do more Twilight stories!!
This story was so good! i can't believe its the only twilight fan-fict. i can find on here.
Please right some more, you've really captured the characters just like they would be in the books! really well done.
this was good but i didnt enjoy it, it felt weird reading it and just to be a party pooper Alice isnt older than Jasper, he'd been around decades before she was born...
You wrote that well and made it very entertaining. I think one of my problems with the Stephanie Meyer books was the fact that she went so far with the sex and then stopped. It was frustrating, or what I'd read of them was. This was excellent. Jasper was always one of my favorites.
Hey loved the story. Wish you would have worked Jasper's special ability to make the experience more intense. But loved and wish for more!
That was amazing! Exactly what I expected from two vampire mates. Loved it!