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All Comments on 'Story of a Kryptonian Ch. 00'

by vplrthd

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oodsphereoodspherealmost 13 years ago
Good start

Good start so far. I'm curious where you're heading with this story. Is it meant to be a straight up retelling of the Superman story?

oodsphereoodsphereover 12 years ago
Strong start

I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter. Always enjoy reading a good Superman story.

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