by Hypoxia
Definitely different.
Gave 4 stars for concept and execution, not sure of my feelings, yet.
For sure not a fan of the David twist, I didn't think there was any need to suddenly change him from innocent victim to scummy pervert.
Well I've tried twice but I couldn't get into this one. Maybe I should try again later.
from Hypoxia to DOA, you died on acid moron. borrow a gun and do the world a favor.
I'll give you 5 stars after you commit suicide.
really a little all over the map, who really acts like this, and that lack of believability makes it prob a 3 in hindsight.
I gave it four stars b/c I loved the snark about ther occasional thalidomide babies of story ideas born from the subconscious.
Nothing wrong with a head-snapper finale, it's one of the best tricks in the book when executed properly.
I'm a little on the fence about Cissy. She's in her own richly-deserved purgatory, but IDK if that's enough but YMMDV.
Thnaks for the brisk, delightful romp gone rancid worthy of a Twilight Zone or tales from the Darkside twist ending.
Half way thru the first page and couldn't (didn't want to) continue. Not sure what you're trying to say but this isn't the way!
Not so much for intro and middle , but of course that wasn't the author's goal. I have hung out with expats . Hypoxia nailed it. Ouch !