All Comments on 'Straight Chris Makes a Bet'

GEEZ BUD, LEARN THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN "PUBLIC" AND PUBIC.

Seriously? I don't have a lot of time to write so I'm only ever submitting my first drafts. One typo in 1,582 words in just this story and you have a meltdown?

Just kidding, I'm actually really annoyed with myself for missing that. I've submitted an edited version. Thank you for bringing it to my attention, I hope it didn't take you out of the story too much.

most of these trolls don't even read for the actual erotica. They read to expose their prize winning editing skills and general irritability....

This place needs an ignore option.....

I didn't catch he typo. I read it as pubic because that is what I was expecting I guess. Anyway, really enjoyed the story! More please!!!

Actually you would be surprised how often that mistake is made. Good story. My suggestion is to have some else read it. We can't see our mistakes.

These people who get all het up about a typo make me wonder why they read the stories. It can't be for the sex (since they spend so much effort worrying about such a minor thing as a spelling error) so I suggest that we have a small army of grammar fetish lovers who get all excited and aroused over such things!

Perhaps they get hard-ons from finding especially obscure errors!!

If your mind is on the story and is enjoying it then you gloss over minor mistakes, especially when there are very few. It's only when grammatical and typographical errors proliferate and take over the story that they spoil things whereas in this case it's just one extra letter that's involved.

And such errors are also extremely hard for the writer to spot because they don't set off any spellchecker alarms - another reason to forgive such things.

But ignoring all that, this is a cute story that's realistic enough to get you dreaming or even to get you casting your own mind back to that day in the shower when something very similar happened to you.

Short and sweet!

Get over it....did you know there are typos in award winning, best selling author novels? And somehow nobody gives a crap. Anywho wonderful story dunno.

That was truly.. Interesting!

I love the progression, the quickly overcome hesitancy, the pace really keeps up with the eroticism. I'd love to read a chapter 2 where Chris becomes addicted to cum and is taught how to do the 'under 20 trick'.

Ready to join in

I'm a straight guy and I just blew a big load imagining Chris's cock filling my hungry mouth! Mmmm!

The deception as part of the seduction was clever, but a bit more reluctance on Chris's part would have added sexual tension. Seducing a straight guy seems to be a widely held turn on.

This was well conceived and written.

I enjoyed your story very much. I love sucking a hard cock but I don't want mine sucked in return.

Seducing a straight guy it normally not that easy. It takes a lot of luck to find a guy so easily swayed. Ah if only my luck was so good. It always seems to take a lot of work and too much red tape to be worth it in the end.