by Ryan Carlyle
Nice ending... but I'm curious as to what happened with Beto and why Carlos suddenly started avoiding him..
Glad the friendship survived. Glad Carlos knew Ian well enough to know what he was going through and that he let him take their friendship to a new level, and how he interpreted the sex. Felt kinda rushed but was hot. I'm a suker for HEA and this was in a way. I still would like for Carlos to know Beto was a predator. Good writer lots of potential. Good story. Keep writing.
Very nice story! For me the only thing that would have added to the sexuality of it would have been for it to have gone further in the bar. I love public sex and exhibionism, so if the guys had completely stripped Carlos and had been seen that would have topped it for me. Keep up the great stories!
Glad you are enjoying the story so far! It's always nice to hear that.
one of the best stories i've read on this site. i could feel the intensity of the characters.. imagining Nicholas Gonzales as Carlos with Tom Hollands ass.
Thank you for sharing an erotic and amazing story. Sexy Carlos has something to please everyone...hard muscle, pecs, nips, abs and ass. Made me hard (more than once.)
Devyn
Awesome story! Beautiful read plus I like uncut guys (which are very hard to find) :O)
Thanks folks, for the kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It's been on here awhile, so nice to know it still gets read. 😁