All Comments on 'Straight to...Straight?'

I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story... it's easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Generally, I avoid any Valentine stories or activities, since I have no one to share the day with. This IS a good read and a great reminder, about what it's all about. Easily worth the 5 Star Rating. Bravo sir.

already wanting to read part 2

hope u continue this and develop this house sharing friendship into a long term meaningful relationship.

...however T3, i am glad i read this funny, romantic little story. A terrifically tasty Valentine's treat.

I really hope you plan to continue this story.

Hot tales, well told.

This is more of an observation: you write well, but you have several formulas you follow and this story is definitely following along one of them. It read very much like The Last Boy Scout - nice, slow build-up, the really attentive, protective, sensitive guy being fought over by sexually hungry, beautiful women. A winning formula for contests and scores. But I'd love to see a good writer such as yourself stretch himself more often. I completely get the time constraints (evidenced in the editing). Hopefully next time. It's your own damn fault for setting the bar as high as you have.

I loved it...the lucky SOB.

It's good to have you back writing. I will read whatever you choose to put on the board, and look forward to the read at that. 5 all the way.

You sold out on this for a cheap W.

As usual, one of the best stories from one of the best writers! Thank you! You are at the top of my favorite authors list. More, more, more!

Good job. Knocked another one out of the park!

5>>>

What a fun story, wish I were the lucky "gay" guy. I know there would be no way I could have pulled this off!

5*****

The pacing was crazy amazing. An unrealistic scenario written in a complete believable way.

LOVED the multiple dynamics of tension inserted into the story. The refusals first stemming from women's side and then the shift in power to the narrator. The behind the scenes peek at how very different but equally luscious women share living quarters was delicious. Full marks despite the micro- hiccup where Alex both cooks AND does dishes for the Valentines dinner. ! *****

Been waiting ... not so patiently ... for your return.

thanks for the story - a 5 as usual

Thank you for your time and effort

TTT. amid the gloomy LW, weird other stuff, you give us an fun enjoyable story.

If only I met girls like them in college...

Another gem from a master. Of course the jewels will be the final chapters of Two Mothers and It was Just a Blowjob, but I'll take this gem for now.

With these characters it would good to see this turned into a series, maybe with the next chapter being something along the lines of learning to live with four live-in girlfriends, with some more character development, maybe as a St. Patrick's Day or an Easter/Spring Break entry.

Enjoyed it and glad to see you writing again.

Welcome back

I've been on the dark side of this site too long. This was a nice way back. Thanks.

This is pure erotica, masterfully done. It's astonishing how easy this all feels for you, like you could mix this up alongside your morning coffee. It's impressive. It speaks to your ability to pursue such endeavors on a professional level. You truly come across as that: practiced, professional, just polished, small errors aside.

You are incapable of writing a story that doesn't rate a five.

Great story as usual and you used one of my favorite similes, "horny as a three peckered billy goat"

This indeed was a nice little romantic romp. It was a lovely little tail (pun intended) and also looking forward to some of your rewrites as you resume some of your favorite stories.

Oh. Yeah.

Grammatically, I only noticed a "Your" where it should've been "You're".

Maybe it's just due to the length (or lack thereof), but only Ashley and Bruna stuck with me. Heather and Megan didn't stick with me or seem to have many defining characteristics or moments.

I also expected a final "confession" and was a little disappointed that there wasn't one.

All told, I loved it, and (like several others) hope there's a sequel. I'm really looking forward to TMTL continuing, but this was a very nice surprise as well. Thanks for sharing!

Predictable but a really fun and erotic read. Well paced. Realistic dialogue. Well done!

Quite a few girls try to turn gay guys. A few guys have acted gay and been very successful getting pussy.

Well done sir. Was it formulaic, sure. Was it predictable, yeah. Nevertheless your story was well written, fun, and entertaining. I truly enjoyed it and look forward to reading more or your stories. Thank you so very much for sharing it with us.

said Br'er Rabbit. What a lucky dog--getting the girls thinking they could 'cure' him. This is every guy's fantasy. Definitely worth five or six stars.

another great story, glad you're back to writing, thanks!

My cell phone rings this morning with a text and a link to this story. From the beginning it held my attention ... promising a fun ride. Better yet, a dream most guys would wish for - at any age. A definite winner. Shows some guys really do Respect their Best Friends ... and willing to earn the benefits. NellaBarely2

Really really enjoyed this one...wish there were more chapters!

Well done!

...now PLEASE finish "Two Moms, Two Laps" series, or at least post the next chapter!

:)

Very good. Sexy, funny, and enjoyable.

You might not think a girl would love a harem story but I do. That makes it great, and your storytelling. I just find characters that have depth and substance so compelling. It's such a shame that so many (let's face it - male) writers don't think it's important to get to know something about a character before he bangs some big titted cheerleader. Characters are people and you write them with respect. That's hot.

And there is something about the challenge of turning a gay guy that is such a thrilling confirmation of one's sexiness and power.

I so wish I had half of your talent. I'm not sure why my stories are blessed with high marks because next to this fun little tale, mine stink.

I look forward to many, many hours enjoying your writing.

Thanks!!

asianToy

You rock. I am learning a lot from your stories in my burgeoning writing.

...you have managed to make this truly gay one hard also! What a wonderfully woven tale that combined everything and created something far beyond just a stroke story.

Fantastic character profiling without over-burdening the readers with useless details. But you also slipped in little details that make the story come alive such as the humongous trunk of a mid '60's Galaxy, and the required roll of paper towels under the bed of the typical college boy. Superb internal drama with Alex fighting the angst of whether or not to "go there" with his roommates that had become his best friends...but also struggling with the potential for living in a utopian situation. Perfect set up and execution of the "big scene" where Alex "gets converted and goes straight"...totally believable and easily able to visualize.

All in all, another grand slam by an author you can always depend on to make you hard...or moist...or both; but also one that never fails to get your mind to orgasm too. Thank you and good luck in the contest!

Still one of the best writers on this site, Every time I see something new from you I smile as I know its going to be an amazing read.

What's not to like!!!!

Very good considering it was rushed.

Fun story.

The sex was serious but the tone was light IMO which is an odd combo, for an award winner I expected it to be a little more hardcore

Good enough that I would like to read more.|

In fact even without the level of sex I would like to read a novel by you.

Very well done. And I'm not into "group sex" at all. But this had a certain charm about it. For once I'm glad an author left a story unfinished. I don't see a reasonable ending on the horizon for this group and any ending is better left fluttering in the wind. Thanks again.

This story is like one of those ultimate fantasies we all have but know the odds are nil it would ever happen. I really really liked it.

the exposure of this contest will introduce more readers to one of our best writers!

A fantastic and funny story.

Good job Mr./Mrs Author

Great V Day story. When I finished reading it, I was reminded of the story I had read when I was a kid about the hitchhiker being picked up by a bus load of girls! Fun read. Congratulations.

Sexiest most humorous story I've read in a while. Thank you, Mike

Another great story, I enjoy your work, keep writing whenever you can.

I haven't enjoyed a story like that in awhile. Great job.

You handled it well. It was fun and at the same time a commentary on how a lot of young dummies seem to treat women. When all that is needed on both sides is a little respect.

I really enjoyed this one. Just goes to show you a little wine, roses and caring will go a long way!

Really enjoyed the story! Very well written. Only one tiny edit....I know u didn't have time. "But your gay", should have been "you're". Sorry, its my biggest peeve. But I'm wet nonetheless 😀

Every single piece was amazing! Exciting build up, can't wait for next Valentine X'D. 5 stars all the freakin' way.

I REALLY hope you come back to this and let us know about what happens when Alex graduates

great story man! love your works keep it up!

What a lucky guy, wish I had had an experience like that a few times, no, a lot of times. Sigh, and alas.

Adding my well done to the throng.

If it's possible can you write a sequel to this story please!!!!

it was such a great turn on i want to read more

also i wish i was this guy!!!!!!

Fantastic read. Really enjoyed it. Very well written and entertaining. Thank you.

Have you posted this before, or on another site? I swear I've read it before.

I still loved it. GREAT story.

One of the best stories I've read on this site, this was so good and I think you handled the misconceptions concerning gay people very well. You are one talented author and I thoroughly enjoy your stories. Great job!

I've loved all your stories, and this is one of the very best! Keep it up, TTT.

whoa! Number 1 of all the stories I've ever read, great job. When is the movie coming out.........?

Simply an amazing story. Would love to know what happens later on down the road.

And I do NOT believe you just tossed this off for a contest. I've read several of your other stories, and figured this one would be fun. I was right - you kept the suspense building right up to the end. Kudos for a great story, and I hope you get more out there soon. (-:

Very good story!

Just the right amount of romance, and a lot of sex in the end!

Very likable characters, too.

I'm glad they got him drunk, I see a grand future for the five of them!

I felt a connection with the characters, their stories and their personalities.

The story built suspense perfectly and got where everyone wanted it to.

I hope you continue the story.

That ratings here mean nothing.This story isn't even penthouse letter 'quality' masturbation fodder l, but neither is the handful of other stories I checked out from the author so at least consistency is there.

Tip for you, not every woman's every waking thought is about sex. Try writing a real story and not your sad mid life crisis fantasies.

To Asthecrowflies...,

Clearly you are entitled to your opinion, however, the rating from hundreds of readers and the dozens of positive comments is indicative of the quality of the story. Go troll somewhere else.

....I had a situation so similar to this, it's almost frightening.

Lot's of difference in circumstances, head count, etc., but the bottom line is, I ended up in an off campus house with seven girls....and I made 8 for a full house.

To the goth girl that claims women don't think about sex all the time.....you're right....until faced with a challenge....then the challenge becomes almost all consuming.

In my case, I'm bi. And by the time the semester ended, I'd had everything done to me a girl can do. And I'd slept with every one of them....although no schedule came out of it. I stayed on another semester before changing schools to pursue my doctorate. Two if the seven ended up at my school. We shared my apartment for three of the four semesters I was there. And I asked one of them to marry me. She did and we have been happier than I believed two people could be. She sets the schedule for sex, I set the romance schedule (dates, dinners, dancing, walks in the park when the lilacs are in bloom, etc.). It works for us....and out kids (all three of them) seem happy and well adjusted.

I really hope you keep on writing this nice story... Nice building and a good track.

as my own history goes... many girls withhold from those who pursue them and then whine when someone doesn't... if you continue then you might bring in another bad boy or a girl that tries to sabotage the garden...

Can you please go back to the blackmail series

Well done.

Another great tale.

Fun story. Would love to see a follow up where they all find out he was never actually gay.

As a female, I think this is one of the best stories on this site. Well done 10/10!

Good when you want to be.

Original, fresh, and fun

Really well written and you had just the right mix of teasing and storytelling/background building before the eventual big event. The fact I read to the end even after I...finished, is testament to how gripping this story was! Just for future, it would have been nice for the eventual moment of penetration to have been more of a big deal. Great story though :) would love a sequel!

Your stories are always beautiful.

I really enjoyed the way you arranged the thoughts, it was the best story I've read so far! You are am amazing writter. Keep up the good work!!

Sth else :)

Delicious way to get the gayness fucked out of you. I'd trade places with him any day

Not just hot, but extremely well written. The payoff was worth it, but it never felt like the story was dragging along either. The characters felt real, and the emotional impact was felt right along with the sex. Bravo!!

The second best story I've read on here, and I've read a lot. Very well written, and the erotica was amazing.

I'd kill for a full length story with Ashley and Meagan at least! 5 stars of course.

loved this story...the sex was fun and hot..but the story

was even better..

bravo!

I don't care if it could really happen like that or not..

5 stars!

I mean they're friends... Throwing around the word "love"... But he's only there for that semester and then he's what...? Gone...?

I mean, this is just the equivalent of summer loving, right...? Not as if they'll be together for life...

And if they ARE together for a long time, are they going to be upset when they learn he never WAS gay...? He never actually out and out said he WAS, just let them make the assumption... But he DID say things to substantiate the thought...

It would make a nice sequel of him hanging around, maybe getting a job locally while they're still in school... And one of them, likely Bruna or Ashley, broaching the question... Maybe while in bed with him one night...

Very sexy, well written and the pacing was excellent. I was excited from the beginning to end. Thank You!

I realized I had read this already by the 3rd paragraph but decided it was worth another go.

Fantastic little tale, so well crafted and presented. An all time favorite!

asianToy