All Comments on 'Straighting Out My Niece'

I really liked your story. You have a great imagination. I would, however, like to know what the character is thinking and feeling not just doing.

I enjoy both incest and D/s stories so this should have been good. Unfortunately this missed the mark, the plot was rushed and just an excuse for the fucking. As for the writing I am pretty sure that straighting and groundation for example are not really words. Certainly not English anyway. -- UK CYNIC

It was good, just ignore negative comments. While it could be a little better I generally enjoyed it. At least you have the courage to write a story.